Missing!
Once upon a time there was a greedy mouse called pom-pom. She is 8 years old, She likes to eat and she lives in a hole in a tree stump underground,One day she got lost in a forest after weeks for searching for home she found a house to live in.From then on she
snuck food every night.One night she realized there was only crumbs left, when a child named Alaya came down stairs for a midnight snack pom-pom ran away in a flash,Then when Alaya went into the kitchen she realized the food is missing! So she ran up stairs to tell her mum and dad,They shot up straight away as they were hearing this,They ran down the stairs
like lightning.Mum and dad both got brooms and searched for mice then they found a family of mice and killed them! Pom-pom was terrified.She ran as fast as she could, but dad found her but before they could do anything Alaya said ¨can we keep her,She's very cute¨ mum and dad were surprised by what she said they looked at pom-pom they said ok but you need to work to get pocket money then pom-pom lived happily ever after in her new home.
KIA Ora Lilia,
ReplyDeleteI like your story and your punctuation.