Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 27 August 2021
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Lilia,
ReplyDeleteKai pai inserting the image! Lovely drawing of Joy. Good to see you beginning to use similes, I wonder if you could add more of this. For example, greeny blue dress as scaled as a fish.
Hi Lilia, I love your drawing of Joy. Do you like the movie? I loved it, my favourite character was Sadness.
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